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New Demigod: Baellor

Hopefully this is new

By on December 23, 2009 1:54:45 PM from Demigod Forums Demigod Forums

Deepsmoke

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Apologies if this is similar to an idea that has been posted before, I just thought something from the demon world might be an idea to have a demigod based around.


Strengths: Good alrounder (Fire based)
Weaknesses: Ice, water, smothering (anything that affects fire badly)

Appearance: He's a Fire elemental with a flame whip and cloak of smoke.

Play: Baellor has both defensive and attacking abilities to aid his fellow demigods.


Normal:

Fast attack, similar to Unclean Beast

Ice damage does double damage but he heals when entering or struck by fire.

Abilities:

Active:

Charge: 4 damage levels - 25 damage per level, Baellor crashes into the target closing the distance between that target and himself

Smother:  Blows a smoke cloud unsettling anyone caught in it. Cinders and breathing cause damage within the cloud casing 4 to 16 damage a second for 20 seconds when the cloud dissipates; Demigods are stunned for 3 seconds if caught in or enter the cloud. (4 levels)

Firewall: a Wall of flame comes from the ground which is equal in length to the normal path widths. 4 Levels, each increases the damage, duration and surface area affected.

Consume: Reduces Damage to him by 50% from targetted structure, which takes 60 to 200 damage a second for 10 seconds (similar to Rook's Structure transfer without the health regain, 5 levels)

Flame Lash: Does 50 to 250 damage to targetted creature and anything between target and Baellor (5 levels).


Passive:

Does continual damage to anything within a 15ft radius of him, harming friends and enemies alike.


Story:

He is not well liked by his brethren who keep away from him to a large extent. He has been forced to be a loaner for most of his life, as getting close to others is not really possible, whilst in the demon domain he was forced to fight hard to be independent rather than become a demon servant. Fierce battles ensued until the demons learnt to leave him alone and risk their lives.

Baellor as you might expect, is very hot headed and gets angry easily, sometimes to his cost. He feels that others must pay for the life he has endured which has left him at least slightly unhinged and when that happens, the area around him becomes extremely unfriendly to anyone in that location.


Have left out certain details so that others may consider what would be balanced or add suggestions, thanks.

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December 23, 2009 9:13:04 PM from Demigod Forums Demigod Forums

sounds really odd and useless IMO..  I cant give much constructive criticism though.  A lot of those skills are kind of silly or dont fit.

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January 16, 2010 6:55:56 PM from Demigod Forums Demigod Forums

Sounds good, but it needs some more offensive abilities.  

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August 25, 2010 9:20:53 AM from Demigod Forums Demigod Forums

Simmilar to the Torchbearer, but stuck on flame mode, don't you think?. He kind of reminds me of Shadow the Balrog from Lord of the Rings.

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